immonen illustrations

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1. Esteban Pedreros on March 30, 2007 10:50 am

   I kind of like the sequence, but I have a couple of observations:

   First panel: everything ok, lights make sense

   Second panel: Why is the woman’s face visible, there is exactly the same amount of light in the oom as seen on the first panel, and the light fom above should readh the woman’s face… it should light the man’s upper body either.

   third panel: ok

   fourth panel: The man’s back shouldn’t have any light on, you should have repeated the light effect from the first panel, and the position of the door seems to have changed from the first panel.

   fifth panel: once again, the upper side of the woman’s body shouldn’t have any light on it.

   Well, I hope no to be a wet blanket, I just wanted to help.

2. xoshua on March 30, 2007 11:49 am

   definitely curious to see where this is going.

3. k- on March 30, 2007 2:11 pm

   geez stuart. learn how to draw, would you?

   and i’m not sure that third panel is really ok.

4. Esteban Pedreros on March 30, 2007 2:21 pm

   I’m sorry, i didn’t mean to be an ass… I just think that the light is wrong

5. azaceta on March 31, 2007 12:19 pm

   Esteban–

   Once you let go of trying to “get things right”, you’ll realize what a great use of blacks that page is. The best artist don’t go for “right”.

   P.

6. Esteban Pedreros on April 1, 2007 10:03 pm

   I’ll try, but I’m as square as a dice.

7. Robert Mansperger on April 4, 2007 12:00 pm

   I love how you’ve used stark black and white in a highly stylized approach to tell the story so far. Very dramatic, quiet, and sad. While in a realistic sense the lighting is off - you’ve established an atmosphere and weight to the images that wouldn’t work well otherwise.

   Can’t wait to see how this progresses.